OH MY GOD!!!Is it really your blog Mister-I-am-so-averse-to-writing-poetry-despite-being-good-at-it DS????This is awesome!! Precisely what i feel like saying sometimes when i dont get a muse. I am SO glad to have read this!Keep rocking :D
@ NS Thanks for the compliments NS. But is this a haiku? And yeah, I still dont know how to write a poem :P I wrote my state of mind whenever I sit down to write, the topic was rescue so this fitted in perfectly!!
This is a beautiful poem. You are right to wonder if it's haiku. I wonder every time I write haiku if it's haiku. This is a haiku writer's question.
@ alicekeysmdI think if its beautiful then it does not matter much if it is a haiku or not!!!Thanks for your comment on my blog!
This is beautiful but haiku usually has 3-5-3 or 5-7-5 syllables. The first line needs less. Maybe use Save (1 sylb) instead of rescue (2 sylb) Does this help? :-)Eliz