Thursday, March 7, 2013

Breeze - Haiku

I feel God is around
When I am caressed 
by the breeze
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Some say there is no God
We can't see him, I say
Can you see the Breeze?

Written for Haiku Heights

7 comments:

  1. There is an old Christian hymn that contains this line: "In the rustling grass, I hear Him, pass' He speaks to me everywhere."

    That rustling reminds me of a breeze. No, I can't see a breeze, but I can hear it. Perhaps that is one of the voices of God.

    No Ruffling Breeze

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  2. Wow!! That is so succinctly put!!

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  3. This is beautiful and wise and profound. ;-)
    Eliz

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  4. Thanks Eliz for the generous comment!!

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  5. This is a lovely pair of haiku. Inspirational.

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  6. Beautiful words and such strong faith. Lovely Haiku DS! :)

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  7. God is everywhere and in everything :)

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